tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6504553034105507540.post4479480243859572966..comments2023-11-02T01:29:26.816-07:00Comments on McDonnell Writing: The Doctor Visit -- a #fridayflash storyAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08236529774839136879noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6504553034105507540.post-10960030159704141532010-04-01T10:23:42.958-07:002010-04-01T10:23:42.958-07:00These guys are always such fun to read about! Love...These guys are always such fun to read about! Loved the dialogue.Cat Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14160039271069426174noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6504553034105507540.post-54099152075003012010-03-29T11:55:57.146-07:002010-03-29T11:55:57.146-07:00Oh why are those fellas always givin ol Doc the bi...Oh why are those fellas always givin ol Doc the biznez? Just what you'd expect from a couple of fellas named Petey and Muggs.Mark Kerstetterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13307987573435067415noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6504553034105507540.post-10657543305665527062010-03-27T14:08:56.409-07:002010-03-27T14:08:56.409-07:00Thanks, Eric!Thanks, Eric!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08236529774839136879noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6504553034105507540.post-33801182133737289152010-03-27T08:28:30.026-07:002010-03-27T08:28:30.026-07:00The dialogue in this was excellent. This was a goo...The dialogue in this was excellent. This was a good one!Eric J. Krausehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05774468607814244185noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6504553034105507540.post-14467510774764763312010-03-26T20:17:09.280-07:002010-03-26T20:17:09.280-07:00Cecelia, it's funny how guilt works. . . thing...Cecelia, it's funny how guilt works. . . things can come back to haunt you.<br /><br />Michael, thanks, I like old time lingo. My kids don't know what I'm saying half the time.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08236529774839136879noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6504553034105507540.post-77180756026854262262010-03-26T17:52:08.427-07:002010-03-26T17:52:08.427-07:00well done. love the lingo like lummox. old timey f...well done. love the lingo like lummox. old timey feel.Michael Solenderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01120045114297450520noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6504553034105507540.post-76038497076550961132010-03-26T15:37:49.533-07:002010-03-26T15:37:49.533-07:00LOL! I loved this one. :) Everyone's got a gu...LOL! I loved this one. :) Everyone's got a guilty conscience.<br /><br />CDCecilia Dominichttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12799727636246434837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6504553034105507540.post-37129254844911296792010-03-26T14:57:21.918-07:002010-03-26T14:57:21.918-07:00Thanks everyone. Glad you liked the dialogue. It w...Thanks everyone. Glad you liked the dialogue. It was a fun write, as usual when I write about these two lugs.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08236529774839136879noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6504553034105507540.post-56443282684059132322010-03-26T13:22:26.309-07:002010-03-26T13:22:26.309-07:00"Drop your trousers."
"Nuts to tha..."Drop your trousers."<br /><br />"Nuts to that."<br /><br />"We will get to them eventually, yes, but let me get a glove."<br /><br />That's how I responded, anyway. Fun work, sir!John Wiswellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07416044628686736927noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6504553034105507540.post-82925239000761645222010-03-26T12:15:34.486-07:002010-03-26T12:15:34.486-07:00These two guys are adorable, though they probably ...These two guys are adorable, though they probably wouldn't like that description.<br /><br />Dialogue is the best!<br /><br />"Drop your trousers."<br /><br />"Nuts to that."<br /><br />LAUGHED so much at that. Er. Well. Ahem.<br /><br />Great piece!Marisa Birnshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17945909737147497606noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6504553034105507540.post-70665474585232715092010-03-26T08:22:43.804-07:002010-03-26T08:22:43.804-07:00Folsk? You been at the bathtub gin mazzzer?
Very ...Folsk? You been at the bathtub gin mazzzer?<br /><br />Very enjoyable. Classic double act. The doctor should remember - be sure your sins will find you out.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6504553034105507540.post-75685704351268074382010-03-26T08:00:32.300-07:002010-03-26T08:00:32.300-07:00Love these characters!
This was fun, "much be...Love these characters!<br />This was fun, "much better to deal with folsk you know" indeed!<br />Cracking dialogue here (and I always enjoy it when sermonising hypocrites get theirs!)mazzz_in_Leedshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01498100483681096442noreply@blogger.com